"Rin was a two hundred year old pack robot Luna found" If the year is 2100, then Rin was made in 1900...and I must ask where the HECK have my pack robots BEEN all my life!!
How wonderful ! You really bring to life what we are just now beginning to experience out here in the desert, and in a form we can only remember; a story from a beloved family member before we sleep...
I follow you for your biting political comments, but this is a nice bonus. Your tender and thoughtful treatment of a future dystopian world should give deniers pause. I look forward to the next episode.
So sorry David, but I won't be subscribing. I have enough to cope with, with today's technology; can't do one hundred years from now. Good luck to you, Janice
A very intereting concept. I like it and look forward to next Sunday's segment. A look into the possible future of our part of this land. Thanks.
Wonderful! I love it! Can’t wait for more.
What a great beginning to your novel! Can’t wait to find out the adventures you have in store for Luna. Grandpa sounds like a pretty cool guy 💕
I really enjoyed it, it hooked me! I’ll look forward to the next chapter.
Wonderful start, one teensy niggle...
"Rin was a two hundred year old pack robot Luna found" If the year is 2100, then Rin was made in 1900...and I must ask where the HECK have my pack robots BEEN all my life!!
How wonderful ! You really bring to life what we are just now beginning to experience out here in the desert, and in a form we can only remember; a story from a beloved family member before we sleep...
Bravo !
Fitz,
I follow you for your biting political comments, but this is a nice bonus. Your tender and thoughtful treatment of a future dystopian world should give deniers pause. I look forward to the next episode.
Looking forward to ……..how/why your world progresses!
So sorry David, but I won't be subscribing. I have enough to cope with, with today's technology; can't do one hundred years from now. Good luck to you, Janice
Very moving though very sad apocaylptic assessment of life to come if we fail to act.
Great! I KNEW you can write. This is a treat. Can't wait for Sun.
I love the story but the setting is both terrifying and hopeful. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
I like the story and would buy the ebook if it exists.